The Castle Karlstadt – Excerpt 10

The Castle Karlstadt – Excerpt 10

  The priest led me to what I assumed was his vestry. There were five men already in attendance within. They were introduced to me in what I presumed was their standing in the local community. The first was the Mayor, who looked totally unprepared for this meeting, he seemed to be totally bewildered by the proceedings.

The second was the Lieutenant commanding the local militia, who were there it seemed to keep order, but no reason was offered, why? The third was more interesting to me, another priest but by his looks, a zealot, He had that look, more warrior than priest. I was usually a good judge of character. I liked this man on sight. I had the feeling that you could rely on him, come what may?

The third man introduced himself, ‘I am Doctor Friedrich Eisner of the Vienna University, I am a protégé of the renowned Van Helsing!’ which I thought was all well and good, but I still had no clue where all this was leading. Or for that matter who the hell Van Helsing was?

The final member of the quintet was introduced to me as Bruno, the local blacksmith and the strongest man in the area. I could believe that, he was tall about 5.10 with a barrel chest and muscular arms and legs, he was bald and bullet headed, but he looked a formidable character. Unfortunately I disliked him on sight, I knew the type, he would resent taking orders from a relative stranger, he would bear watching.

I looked around the room, taking in the assemble group, than shaking my head in consternation said,’ OK! I know who you are! Why am I here? and more to the point, what do you want from me, there must be something?

(C)Damian Grange 2019

15 thoughts on “The Castle Karlstadt – Excerpt 10

  1. You know what, Malcolm, of all the bloggers I have read on WordPress this past year, I feel you are the most professional. I mean, each time I read the excerpts from The Castle Karlstadt, I feel like I’m reading a famous classic novel.
    I wish the world gets to read this soon. It is beyond praise. It’s professional, skilled, superb, crisp writing.

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  2. Okay, I’m hooked. I really love the way you describe things, I mean, it’s just enough to give you a picture but not so much as to give away all the mysteriousness of it. I think that’s the toughest part in writing gothic horror. You’re doing a tremendous job. This reminds me of an old Italian classic film that I had watched, it’s called ‘I vampiri’. It was a first of its kind then, 1950s I think.
    Anyway, I can’t wait for the next update Sir. 🙈


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