The Castle Karlstadt – Excerpt 5
I was just drifting off, when I heard something, was I , knowing the Castle’s history imagining things. Or had I truly heard something. I sat up stealthily and reached for my rifle which lay beside me. I was taking no chances.
I had been made aware that there were brigands and gypsies residing in the area, a lone traveller would be taken by either as easy pickings. I listened intently for several minutes, but not another sound was to be heard. I decided that maybe I had imagined it, or that maybe it was just the wind blowing through a hole in the ceiling.
The following morning, I awoke refreshed and after breakfast decided to continue down the valley into the town itself. I had no notion of the welcome that would be waiting for me there.
After I had fed and watered my horse, I mounted up and headed in the direction of Karlstadt. I was looking forward to staying there and relaxing for a few days, The way my friendly nun had described it, it seemed ideal.
If I had known the welcome that was awaiting me, I think I would have rapidly rode in the opposite direction, in hindsight naturally. As I passed through one of the outlying villages, I sensed an air of tension about the place. Maybe I should have heeded the warning signs.
I was a stranger, mounted on a good horse, armed with several weapons, all of which to these people were of modern manufacture. I think they obviously took me for a military man. As a soldier, I was used to being viewed by peasants in this way. Instinctual fear, I suppose you would call it.
(C) Damian Grange 2019
Hooked to the tale!
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Thank you so much, I’m truly surprised how well this has been received! My own favourite is Conor Dillon.
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The setting here is captivating… Feels like watching a series in the mind’s eye.
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Thank you so much Isha, your comments make me feel very humble !
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Knowing it was not initially meant to be as popular, you are pleasantly surprised by it’s popularity, is a mark of your skills as a writer.
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Thank you so much, sweetie, it has really surprised me!
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This is getting more and more captivating……the setting totally conquered me.😍
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This story has really surprised me, by the reception it has received I wrote it for a collection of horror stories which I will be publishing soon in Kindle.
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You left us hanging with the reaction of the villagers
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That was a ploy to heighten the suspense!
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